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im a writer for leather books, plz read this story i have began. theres no punctutation yet i wil do after?

Public Comments

1. I hope you plan on paying your editor big bucks. This story is illiterate and also not very interesting.
2. I'm sorry, but this story is a bit unoriginal. Did you know there has been more boxing films made is Hollywood than any other film? So bookwise, i don't know how great it will do. But don't feel bad! If you really want my advice, I would write fantasy. It can last for a long time and follow no rules of the real world whatsoever. Like, for example, Warriors. I don't know if you've heard of them or not, but they are the BEST!!! P.S. Thats my opinion. If you think your story will do well, go for it. And keep in mind, im only like 12.